We created a pitch for our thriller opening sequence idea, and presented it to the rest of our class. We created a questionnaire and handed out copies to each person for them to fill in whilst we were presenting our pitch.
Here, we have brought together all of the different audience responses from the questionnaires:
Audience
Feedback.
What did you think of our overall pitch?
·
Good, clear
·
Well
detailed
·
Good, strong
·
Good
presentation, slightly confusing
·
Good idea to
use pictures on presentation and to explain them verbally instead of reading
from the text on the board
·
Good, some
points could be clearer
What did you think was our best idea? Why?
·
Car crash
& singling out one person in a crowd – very dramatic
·
Car crash
–dynamic
·
Singling out
one person in a crowd
·
Car crash,
drug use
·
Storyline
itself- original
·
The sparkler
idea
·
Sparkler
burning down
·
Camera shots
(focus pull) –to show emotion
·
Car crash
–realistic, dynamic
·
Camera shots
(focus pull) show isolation
·
Focusing on
one person in a crowd
What did you think was our worst idea? How
could we improve this idea?
·
Circles idea
–maybe too complicated. Simplify it.
·
Circles idea
–unclear in pitch. Darts –no reasoning?
·
Didn’t
understand circles idea in pitch
·
Circles
–irrelevant/ well explained?
·
Drugs- make
things more clear
·
No specific
plot
Did you think our ideas matched the genre? If yes, how? If no,
why?
·
Yes-
circles, conventions, psychological, flashbacks, memories, carcrash, drugs,
·
No- circles
didn’t really fit (need more explanation?), childhood?
Was the sub-genre/hybrid clear?
·
Yes- Met
conventions, Psychological, Flashbacks,
Maybe- thriller/drama?
·
No- wasn’t
mentioned, unclear
Target Audience – 15-30
At which stage of Todorovs theory does our sequence come in at?
1.
–11
2.
–111111
3.
–1
4.
–
5.
– 11
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