Voice Over
We decided the transition between the locations and the hospital scene weren't clear enough for the audience as they were unsure of which character had died, be it the female or male. Although this would become clear later in the story, we decided that we wanted our opening sequence to be as clear as possible in order to capture the attention of as many people as possible. Therefore, we decided to try and include a voice over of a nurse or family member telling the protagonist (Lily) of the unfortunate loss of her boyfriend in the car crash.
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